Talk:Colton Sissons/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

Infobox and lede

 * "Predators American Hockey League" "Predators' American Hockey League" ✅
 * I really hate how adding "Canada" makes the infobox so wide, but I know that someone will add it back even if you or I remove that
 * Ditto. The worse is when someone is from PEI. It stretches it out so far.

Early life

 * Comma after "North Vancouver, British Columbia" per MOS:GEOCOMMA ✅

Amateur

 * "forgo his NCAA eligibility by signing with them." ✅
 * Comma after "Westside Warriors" ✅
 * "Sissons'" "Sissons's" per MOS:'S ✅
 * Specify first year of NHL draft eligibility, since the junior clubs also do drafts ✅
 * Comma after "for the 2012-13 season" ✅
 * Link "Team Canada's national junior team" to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team ✅

Professional

 * "Predators 2013" "Predators' 2013" ✅
 * Comma after "Admirals coach Dean Evason" ✅
 * Link AHL All-Star Game ✅
 * Link first instance of "rating" to plus-minus ✅
 * Use some synonym in "His assist marked" to avoid repetition of "assist" in the sentence ✅
 * "coaching chance" "coaching change" ✅
 * Link "captain" to Captain (ice hockey) ✅
 * "Predators opening goal" "Predators' opening goal" ✅
 * "Predators organizations" "Predators organization" ✅
 * Comma after "for the 2016 Stanley Cup playoffs" ✅
 * Link exhibition game ✅
 * "Predators fourth-line" "Predators' fourth-line" ✅
 * Might want to clarify that this meant Sissons was exposed for the Knights to potentially take ✅
 * No commas in "reached, at least, the 15-point mark" ✅
 * Mention some sentence that he was invited to the bubble ✅
 * "Nick Cousins' goal" "Nick Cousins's goal" per MOS:'S ✅
 * "Predaots" "Predators" ✅
 * "400th career NHL game with the Predators ." We know that's the only team for which he's played ✅

Awards and honours

 * Good

General comments

 * Images are properly licensed and relevant
 * No stability concerns in the revision history
 * Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. As always, ping me with questions and let me know when you're finished. —  Ghost River  00:37, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * , done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:41, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for working so quickly, happy to pass! —  Ghost River  16:00, 18 January 2022 (UTC)