Talk:Columbian Squires

Non impartial language
"Have fun" is not impartial language. This should be changed to something like "participate in group activities." The entire phrase should be reworked. 76.28.72.87 (talk) 23:14, 14 September 2010 (UTC)

Pamphlet
I can see that there has been some effort to improve this, but it still reads like a pamphlet designed to introduce new prospects to the organization, and also includes unexplained insider terminology (e.g. "Faithful Friar"). It might be fine for Columbian Squires and Knights of Columbus, but not for general readership. Jack N. Stock (talk) 12:55, 31 December 2019 (UTC)