Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 27 December 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Failing article solely because the prose (and WP:MOS issues) is not up to GA standards. Here are a few examples (these are just a few, there maybe even more)
 * Coming Up to Breathe is the fifth major label, full-length studio album from MercyMe.
 * Released in on April 25, 2006,
 * Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews from critics
 * "Something Like You" has been compared to the sound of U2 (particularly the song "Where The Streets Have No Name"),[6] while "3:42 a.m. (Writer's Block)" has been described as 'soulful classic rock'
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * "Background" has basically every period cited with FN#1 which makes the article look even more clumsy
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Saying "Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews." is being biased
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Active users have been reverting vandalism, which was last done back in mid November 2011
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * File:Mercyme cutb.jpg does not comply with WP:NFCC; its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free artwork gives any educational value. The second file completely fails WP:NFCC.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I suggest you fixed all of these concerns, get it copy edited, allow others to give it a WP:PR and then re-nominate at a later date. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  23:23, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I suggest you fixed all of these concerns, get it copy edited, allow others to give it a WP:PR and then re-nominate at a later date. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  23:23, 27 December 2011 (UTC)