Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * For the "Recorded" section, show what year it was recorded followed by a semicolon and a list of studios where it was recorded (Ex: 2009; Studio 1, Studio 2)
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Singles do not need to be sourced in the infobox because they have their own respective articles
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead

 * Released on April 25, 2006... → "Released on April 25, 2006 by INO Records..."
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Background

 * No issues

Composition

 * Two subsections not necessary in this context
 * Done  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * No issues

Singles

 * An album cut from the album, "No More No Less", spent one frame on the Hot Christian Songs chart, debuting and peaking at number thirty..[31] → Get rid of extra period at end of statement
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Release

 * Replace all of the "No."s with "number"
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

 * No issues

Personnel

 * No issues

Charts and certifications

 * No issues