Talk:Common Impact

I am seeking assistance on correcting the content of this page to remove the tags. Does anyone have expertise in how to help with this?

Kmmd (talk) 13:43, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

suggestions
First, about refs; the WSJ article is only about the general phenomenon; the Boston Globe one is however in large part about the organization, and this can be emphasized by a selected one-sentence quotation. At least one more specific ref would be desirable also. Second, this article should at least mention the major projects. If the projects have any of them 2 or more good 3rd party independent reliable published sources, print or online (but not blogs or press releases), they could possibly have articles, and you could refer to them; if not, a section here on each would be helpful, with a reference. Three major projects is about the right number, f there are more, just mention them. As for people, it's appropriate to give a little more indication of who the 2 principle are (degrees, positions--very briefly, but enough for context). The general tone problem is that instead of describing what they do, from which we can see that the group is notable, the article simply says that it is. Wikify mans putting in links to appropriate Wikipedia articles mentioned there--probably this can be done to replace all the see also's. You might also read   our guide to writing Wikipedia articles.DGG (talk) 02:34, 25 July 2008 (UTC)

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