Talk:Commonitorium (Orientius)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  17:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (Highest is 5.9%, due to incidental similiarity of line.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * with warnings against its hindrances. To my reading, against is used here to mean about, so I'd suggest you change it to about its hindrances or on possible hindrances if this is true.
 * Good catch. I have changed it.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:32, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Orientius used the Vulgate as suggest changing to Orientius used the Vulgate translation of the Bible as.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Martin Delrio, who dubbed it the Commonitorium is it known why he chose to dub it such?
 * Unfortunately, the source doesn't say.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * two prayers attributed to Orientius suggest change to two prayers which have been attributed to Orientius and then add a comma.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * That is all my comments. Passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:34, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I appreciate the review!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:01, 26 January 2018 (UTC)