Talk:Compassion Canada

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The article currently reads like a brochure for the organization rather than an encyclopedia article. Some of the language is in the first person, there is a lot of puffery and claims are made without any substantiation. The article really needs gutting and rewriting but it's unclear what to replace the content with since there are no independent sources. An organization this size ought to have some reputable, independent press coverage at least. I'm having difficulty finding any that I can access in order to write anything more encyclopedic, the ones I've found just seem to be fairly trivial community pieces about people raising money for them. -- SiobhanHansa 08:18, 4 August 2007 (UTC)