Talk:Compilation of Final Fantasy VII/GA1

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Reviewer: Rhain1999 (talk · contribs) 03:25, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Expect a review shortly. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me 03:25, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Lead

 * "Other returning staff include writer Kazushige Nojima, art director Yusuke Naora, composer Nobuo Uematsu." - I'd consider placing "and" before "composer".

Titles

 * "this never came to pass" sounds a bit too informal for me. Maybe you could change to sentence to something along the lines of "The game was never released to western markets, despite plans to do so."
 * "developers were not pleased with the game as it has been released in Japan" - this could be rephrased to "developers were not pleased with the Japanese version of the game", like in the article about the game itself.

Setting

 * "an mercenary" should be "a mercenary".
 * There should be a comma after "General Rhapsodos".

Production

 * I believe the semicolon should be replaced with a colon in the sixth paragraph of the "Creation" section.
 * I'm not sure if "thought up" is the best term; maybe "conceived"?
 * Wiki-link PlayStation Portable.
 * It might be nice to include a picture in this section (maybe one of Yoshinori Kitase?), but that is simply a personal suggestion, and is entirely your choice; it will not affect the outcome of this review.

Reception

 * T:VGR states that GameRankings scores should be limited to two digits of precision; for example, "85%" instead of "84.60%".
 * I'm not sure what the guidelines state in terms of quotes, but shouldn't the name of the games be italicised ("Final Fantasy VII", "FF7", etc.)?
 * Polygon should be italicised.
 * Most of the references following the sentence about Famitsus review of Dirge of Cerberus should be placed at the end of the previous sentence; only the reference supporting Famitsus review should be placed after the latter sentence.
 * Speaking of which, I'm confused as to what "gave the game a delayed a highly critical review" means; this looks like a typo.
 * "...selling 100,000 copies on its first day of release in Japan, Advent Children Complete was cited as a reason..." - either add "and" after "Japan," or separate into two sentences.