Talk:Conductores de Venezuela/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:15, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Very few changes are needed to pass. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:26, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * Change the semicolon after "Synthesis of the Arts" to a comma; back half is not a complete sentence.
 * "Monocooking" isn't an English word. Some of my searches for monococción indicate the correct translation would be single-firing (Single-fire process is a redirect).
 * Remove comma after "since its construction".
 * Remove comma after "as a painter".

Source spot checks
(Only three given the small number of sources)
 * [6] ✅ BBC Mundo: "...la Universidad Central de Venezuela en Caracas, la universidad pública más importante del país, y donde fue profesor." Also supports the Rivera-related claims.
 * [8] ✅ Cerámica Carabobo site notes the use of single-firing ovens
 * [11] ✅ AP report quotes him as saying “Este mural se adueñó de mi corazón”

Other

 * Earwig shows no issues.
 * Run IABot. The one from Cerámica Carabobo is dead but archived, so this is needed.
 * Images are all freely licensed and Venezuela has FoP.
 * Two of the three images need alt text, though "Refer to caption" will suffice. (There is an alt parameter in Wide image.)


 * Quicker than I thought, though IABot is down for me so I haven't managed to do that, but can hopefully get to it manually soon. Other points done. Kingsif (talk) 05:48, 4 August 2022 (UTC)