Talk:Conduit (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 05:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)


 * "which would go on become" go on to become
 * "find that her younger brother" Needs clarification as to whose younger brother this refers to.
 * "similarities to his own childhood" Childhood experience?
 * "and has not been seen since" never to be seen again or somesuch? Seems a little disjointed.
 * Lake Okobogee links to a disambig page, should be: East Okoboji Lake
 * I think zeroes is more common that zeros and Webster yields Zeroes as well...
 * "episode they wrote" Space after the dot between the ref. Needs removal.
 * "reestablished" re-est
 * "with the episode being describing it as" with the episode being described as?

 That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 05:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): -->  (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  -->
 * A few MoS and prose issues, nothing too serious.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): (citations to reliable sources):  (OR):
 * Perfic'.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): (focused):
 * Perfic'.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Perfic'
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Perfic'.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Perfic'
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Thanks for taking the time to review this. I have addressed the points you've raised, taking your suggestions in all cases but the fourth, where I instead just removed the disjointed-sounding clause. GRAPPLE   X  15:05, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Passed. Good show.  That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 15:39, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks! GRAPPLE   X  15:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)