Talk:Congregation Beth Israel (New Orleans)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  20:55, 5 March 2010 (UTC)

-- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  20:55, 5 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your thorough review. Responding to the issues you've raised:
 * In the lead, and in the Recent events section, "As of 2010, the congregation was sharing space in Gates of Prayer's building", shouldn't it be ---> "As of 2010, the congregation has been sharing space in Gates of Prayer's building"? Same sections, if this ---> "The rabbi was Uri Topolsky" is part of the "As of 2010" sentence then it should be "The rabbi is Uri Topolsky". If not, then it's fine as it is.
 * Fixed.
 * Check. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  21:19, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * In the Hurricane Katrina and aftermath section, this sentence ---> "In the wake of Katrina another 50 member families left New Orleans and the congregation" reads very odd.
 * I've re-worded it in a way that I hope is more clear.
 * Yeah, it reads better, thanks for fixing it.
 * In the Recent events section, "...in the summer Topolsky started a recruitment campaign, placing an advertisement in New York's The Jewish Week newspaper" ---> "...in the summer Topolsky started a recruitment campaign, placing an advertisement in the New York newspaper The Jewish Week", works better.
 * Changed, per your improved wording.
 * Check.
 * In the lead, and in the History section, should this ---> "1903/1904" be formatted like that?
 * Fixed.
 * Check.
 * In the Hurricane Katrina and aftermath section, it would be best if "Federal Emergency Management Agency" was followed by ---> (FEMA), I mean, I know what it means, but how 'bout your reader.
 * Fixed.
 * Check.
 * Same section, "Torah" and "siddurs" should be linked once.
 * Fixed, I believe.
 * "Torah" is still linked twice.
 * Oops! Fixed now.
 * Check. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  21:59, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I think that covers all of it. Jayjg (talk) 02:37, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * One minor thing. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  21:19, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I think I've got it all now. Jayjg (talk) 21:42, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * You have, and thank you for being patient with this review. Anyways, thank you to Jayg for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  21:59, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Jayjg (talk) 23:21, 7 March 2010 (UTC)