Talk:Congress of Durrës/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:06, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 15:06, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:45, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

I have added all my comments below: Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 09:57, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Can we avoid repeating the month in December 25 to December 27, 1918?
 * The lead should be expanded so that it covers all aspects of the article

Background

 * Source for the first para?
 * It may be helpful to add the time period of World War I
 *  made itself a sufficient publicity Should this not be "made for itself"?
 * "newspaper "The Sun"" I think it should be "newspaper The Sun"
 *  while WWI was not still over You should say "First World War" or any one name consistently throughout the article to refer to WWI.

Preparations

 * By the end of World War I Consistency in referring to WWI
 * The first para and the para before "Congress of Tiranë" are apparently sourced.
 * Some paras should be combined so that the section does not look choppy.
 * would server as a domestic support Did you mean "serve"?
 * Albanian newspaper "The Nation" Double quotes not needed
 *  on November 3–4, 1918 Does it mean "from November 3 to 4"? Same for The Congress of Tirana was held on 19–20 December
 * This half-government should not  I think it should be "would not"

Events

 * Add a citation to the end of the intro.
 * They came from most Albanian regions, which were under Italian occupation The comma is not needed, I think. I assume it does not mean they came mostly from Albanian regions.
 * A few subsections after the list would help navigation easier.
 * In addition to the delegates' list "In addition to these delegates"
 * in Mars 1921 (vol.54, p. 155) What does this mean?
 * Vlora is linked after the list, but it is mentioned before the list and should be linked there
 *  self determination  Should this not have a dash?
 * I think the quote in italics would look better in a quote template.
 *  which were expressed by Mehmet Konica's words on December 26 Can this read "which were expressed by Mehmet Konica on December 26 as:"
 *  Hikmet Bey Delvina A redlink, so you should add a few words to introduce this person.
 * Meanwhile, Hikmet Bey Delvina said...the national meeting. Source?

Italian reaction

 * Can the Balkans be wikilinked?

Outcome

 * Apparently unsourced:
 * (The list would change later, other names...basic issues related to Albania.
 * First, on the political level,...Albanian state already formed.
 * Second, it rejected any decision...France and/or England.
 * The congress rejected point V ...central Albania.

Governmental programme

 *  Despite the decisions taken, Albania was still under foreign occupation. Source?

Aftermath

 * The new government did not last long... although the head of state issue was still pending. Source?
 * A retrospective view shows that... the Austro-Hungarian Empire. Source?
 * A retrospective view shows that  Sounds like original research.


 * There is some trouble in citation 6.

That should be all. Would be glad to pass once these are addressed. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 09:57, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

It's already 10 days since the review began. If there is no response within 3 days, I will be forced to fail this nomination. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:24, 10 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Too late, I must fail this. I hope this is renominated soon after the above issues have been fixed. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 04:27, 14 April 2016 (UTC)