Talk:Congressional Institute

Suggested article revisions
Hello! As part of my work with Beutler Ink, I've been tasked with preparing suggestions for improving this article on behalf of the Congressional Institute. From my assessment, the article could use an overall clean up—it contains some superfluous details and dated material.

I've drafted a new version that streamlines the content and removes unencyclopedic information. I also added more recent information and sourcing. Editors can view my draft here. You can see how it differs in content from the current article (note: I had to adjust some of the capitalization and spacing, so the draft looks slightly different now).

I don't think I am suggesting any controversial changes and I've aimed to write a new draft that follows Wikipedia guidelines. However, because of my financial COI, I will not make any edits to the article myself. Instead, I'd appreciate if other editors could review my work and give feedback. If my suggestions look to be an improvement over the current article, I'd love help moving my draft over. Thanks! Heatherer (talk) 00:01, 22 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Update: I will no longer be working on this article. I'd still love for an editor to review my draft, but (also of Beutler Ink) will be taking over to handle feedback and further messages. Thanks! Heatherer (talk) 00:20, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Per Heatherer's note above, I'll be jumping in here to discuss any feedback on this draft and see if editors would be willing to move it into the live article. As part of my work at Beutler Ink, I'm here on behalf of the firm's client the Congressional Institute. Let me know if there are any questions or edits to the draft. 16912 Rhiannon (Talk &middot; COI) 18:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
 * just giving a little nudge to see if you're still able to take a look at the suggested update for this page. To let you know: I'll be offline next week due to travel, so if you have any questions I might be a little delayed in getting back to you but will be sure to reply as soon as I can. Thanks in advance! 16912 Rhiannon (Talk &middot; COI) 20:26, 26 May 2017 (UTC)

✅ – S. Rich (talk) 01:46, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much, S. Rich! I really appreciate your review and making the updates. 16912 Rhiannon (Talk &middot; COI) 02:29, 30 June 2017 (UTC)