Talk:Conjugate vaccine

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Johnfravolda (talk) 19:26, 11 January 2010 (UTC)This article is incomprehesible to the average reader.
 * —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.55.4.36 (talk • contribs) 19:13, 27 September 2006


 * Care to elaborate why, or better, help edit it ? David Ruben Talk 01:07, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

this article is copied. i believe that it was taken from this page: http://en.allexperts.com/e/c/co/conjugate_vaccine.htm

It does appear to be a copy of the above reference, however they copied the Wikipedia, not the other way. I'm the author of the bulk of the text.


 * With due gratititude to the author, I agree that the article could be better. I think that the existing content could be re-arranged and perhaps supplemented with addtional info to build an article more readable for the average Joe. The relevance of mentioning specific mechanisms of the immune repsonse in the context of conjugated vaccines should be made explicit and saved until the very end of the article for those that want to pursue the conept to the bitter end. I can try to give it a shot.Johnfravolda (talk) 19:26, 11 January 2010 (UTC)