Talk:Constance of Antioch/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:06, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:06, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written, without copyvio/dablink/external link issues. A few comments: Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 07:16, 23 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Early life
 * She was born in 1128 A short sentence, can be merged with the earlier one
 * After learning of his death Maybe "learning of" is redundant?


 * Reign
 * Constance's mother again laid claim to the regency I think you should refer to her as "Alice" throughout
 * Fulk sent his envoy to Raymond of Poitiers in France Not sure what "in France" means here, Poitiers is definitely in France. Do you mean Raymond was in France at that time?


 * Family
 * Duplinks, but I think we should retain them for convenience.


 * Images
 * About the caption "Constance's first husband, Raymond of Poitiers, dies in the Battle of Inab" - I wonder if "died" would be more proper.. Maybe the same for "tortures" in the next image.


 * , thank you for your thorough review. I think I fixed all problems you mentioned above. Borsoka (talk) 00:47, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:53, 24 June 2016 (UTC)