Talk:Constantin Al. Ionescu-Caion/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 14:11, 30 November 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * "Symbolist" links to an article describing the art movement
 * Which it should. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * "Caion prioritized scandal, accusing Caragiale" - perhaps. "Caion prioritized a scandal, in which he accused Caragiale..." reads better imho
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * What is a "celebrity trial"?
 * What it says - a court trial where a celebrity is involves.


 * "Despite his own flirtations with nationalism," - the underlined word is essay-like and should be replaced
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * " Caion focused his verve on the nationalist literary current in " - how about "his verve on the Transylvanian contemporary nationalist literary"
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * "Caion became a figure of infamy and ridicule in the Romanian context," - repetition of "figure", perhaps "Caion was equated with infamy and ridicule", or something similar
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * " under various pseudonyms: C. A. I. Nică Burduşel, Ion Filionescu, Marin Gelea, Isac Şt. Micu, Roman Muşat etc.[1]" - suggest removal of "etc" and simply state "under various pseudonyms, such as ..."
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Should "Mage" be in lowercase?
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * The usage of etc is not professional imho
 * ✅ - replaced Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * "Under contract with Adevărul's publishing house " - redundant
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * "sciolistic amateur.[44]" - socialistic?
 * It means sciolistic Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * There are far too many red links, distracting the reader
 * Red links are permitted under the good article criteria and they are only used where there could be a future article on it. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * --Tomcat (7) 13:06, 2 December 2012 (UTC)