Talk:Constantine Komnenos Angelos/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 17:40, 4 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll look at this one. Courcelles (talk) 17:40, 4 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "Constantine Komnenos Angelos was born in c. 1151" Lose the in.
 * "He must have had at least one son, whose name and life are likewise unknown." Can you explain, either in prose or footnote, why he must have had a son?
 * ""farmers unfit for warfare and a contingent of Paphlagonian soldiers", led not even by an experienced commander but by "a certain eunuch"." Cite the quotes directly after.
 * Can you translate or explain in parentheticals the various Byzantine offices whose names are italicized?
 * The link to Prussa is to a dab page
 * Link Fogg Art Museum, specify it is at Harvard.


 * Good work on an obscure subject. Courcelles (talk) 17:54, 4 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi Courcelles, thanks for taking the time to review this! Your suggestions have been implemented. On the titles, I've opted for a description for most of them as most of them originally meant something quite different. Any suggestions beyond GA requirements? Not that this is likely to advance any more, but... Constantine  ✍  19:14, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I think we're all good here now. As to further suggestions, I don't have any, I usually just dump what I notice in a GA review; and I think this article would have trouble at FAC for being too short, and, by the necessity of sourcing, having a couple ambiguous sections.  At any rate, promoting to GA. Courcelles (talk) 19:23, 7 May 2018 (UTC)