Talk:Contraceptive trials in Puerto Rico

Comment by Rgoldfarbterry
While I found this article to be very informative and relatively neutral, I think that there are some areas that could be approved upon. Most, if not all, of the sources are from the (mainland) US, such as Planned Parenthood or PBS. In addition to this, almost all of the information cited in the article comes from these two sources. Perhaps an interesting addition to this article would be sources that originate from Puerto Rico or Puerto Rican people, as the entry is about something that happened in Puerto Rico. Additionally, I might suggest that more contemporary sources be added, as most of those used are from 2012 or before. Overall, however, I think that the author did an excellent job at presenting the topic in a “neutral” way that also presented the controversies surrounding these trials in Puerto Rico.

Rgoldfarbterry (talk) 03:28, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
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Bad language
What does that mean?

As Kimberlé Williams Crenshaw would argue through the theory of intersectionality, ...

How can you argue through something? It is an example of such confused style here, hiding confusing claims. Zezen (talk) 11:11, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

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