Talk:Convair F2Y Sea Dart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 11:05, 14 April 2017 (UTC)

Will get to this shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 11:05, 14 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox;
 * was a unique American seaplane fighter aircraft; What is the purpose of "unique"?
 * The second para needs to be broken to sentences. Except the last sentence the entire para is presented as a single sentence using commas which in the end gives rise to difficulty in getting the flow and the meaning. Break this.
 * It was created "in 1950s" as a result of "to overcome" the problems with supersonic planes taking off and landing on aircraft carriers that was experienced in the 1950s
 * Section 1;
 * Link U.S. Navy on the first mention; not on the second
 * Section 2;
 * "Required" power was to be "put up" by a pair of after-burning Westinghouse XJ46-WE-02 turbojets
 * Section 3;
 * Who is E. D. "Sam" Shannon? Mention his position, if possible
 * He doesn't have a military rank, as he just worked for Convair, as a test pilot. Is that worth mentioning? Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  12:11, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
 * but they could not cure the sluggish performance -> but they were unable to resolve the sluggish performance
 * a demonstration for Navy officials -> a demonstration to the naval officials
 * disintegrated in midair; delink the external link. External links are not allowed in the body of the article per WP:EL
 * Link Second World War
 * breakup of the airframe -> airframe breakage
 * Link airframe
 * He is buried -> He was buried
 * a demonstration for Navy officials -> a demonstration to the naval officials
 * disintegrated in midair; delink the external link. External links are not allowed in the body of the article per WP:EL
 * Link Second World War
 * breakup of the airframe -> airframe breakage
 * Link airframe
 * He is buried -> He was buried
 * breakup of the airframe -> airframe breakage
 * Link airframe
 * He is buried -> He was buried
 * He is buried -> He was buried
 * He is buried -> He was buried


 * 70.4% confidence, violation likely. Please explain this.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 03:55, 27 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Regarding copyvio (barging in as I was passing along) - it is most likely the youtube page created on Nov 16, 2007 copied from the wiki page that existed back then - - looks like an exact copy of the 2007 version, but the wiki version pre-dates the youtube entry.Icewhiz (talk) 08:34, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe Icewhiz is correct here, but I shall investigate the issue. I believe that all other problems have been fixed. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  12:11, 27 April 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 06:05, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 06:05, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 06:05, 29 April 2017 (UTC)