Talk:Conversation Piece at the Royal Lodge, Windsor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 09:43, 27 November 2023 (UTC)


 * The infobox should have more details, including when it was completed, the artist, dimensions, etc.
 * Commas before and after "Princesses Elizabeth and Margaret" in the lead.
 * Add the abbreviation for the National Portrait Gallery in the background section, so it can be used in the following sections. Currently, sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.
 * Royal Lodge should be linked the first time it's mentioned in the background section and unlinked in the description section.
 * Comma after "Margaret" in description section.
 * "It was designed by Jeffry Wyatville." The drawing room or the Royal Lodge?
 * "Second World War" should be linked.
 * Afternoon tea is linked twice.
 * "The Times" should be linked.
 * Add a comma after "boring"
 * "North Shore" should be linked.
 * "had lunch with Elizabeth" She's referred to as queen in the previous sentence, then just by her first name. I'd pick one or the other.
 * References should be archived.
 * Earwig's check looks fine. It's just reporting quotes.


 * It was a pleasure reading another one of your articles. APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 09:43, 27 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Looks good. ✅ APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:18, 4 December 2023 (UTC)


 * , thank you so much! It looks in much better shape now. Right, I'm off to attend to the memorial chapel now. No Swan So Fine (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2023 (UTC)