Talk:Cool Me Down (Gromee and Inna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

I will take this on tomorrow! --K. Peake 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * WP:OVERLINK of Gromee under songwriters
 * It is common practice to link the artist in the infobox if their real name is used, for clarity.


 * Add "a few" before music critics because only three are noted in this article
 * ""Cool Me Down" lyrically speaks" → "the song lyrically speaks"
 * The commercial performance sentence should be directly after the above one
 * "with the single's release, and the song" → "with the song's release, and it"
 * ""Cool Me Down" was a moderate" → "The song was a moderate" and mention the chart it peaked on was the Polish Airplay Top 100

Background and release

 * Pipe demo to Demo (music)
 * The poke fun part is sourced, but where is dissatisfaction mentioned?
 * "Andrzej Gromala (Gromee)," → "Gromee under his real name of Andrzej Gromala," to be specific
 * "cover on their social media" → "cover art on their social media accounts"

Reception and composition

 * Retitle to Composition and reception, as the Wiwibloggs piece mentioning the genre should come first and commercial reception is already last
 * "found that "Cool Me Down" had a" → "observed how "Cool Me Down" has a"
 * "noticed that the song" → "noticed the song"
 * "Czech Republic and" → "the Czech Republic and"
 * This may be confusing, but there is not "the" in front of it. It's like that.

Music video and promotion

 * Remove "for "Cool Me Down"" after "accompanying music video"
 * "to the song wearing" → "to the song, wearing"

Track listing

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts

 * Year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down" → 2021 year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down"

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this is quite a short article so shouldn't be very long! --K. Peake 08:52, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for your review, I have fixed everything apart where noted. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:00, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I am glad to see a response before January has ended, but the wikilink under songwriters should be removed since most reading an article about an artist will already know/guess the real name part and even the Czech Republic article uses the term "the" at the start, so add this. --K. Peake 21:18, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:06, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, very understanding of you to implement those last changes after my further explanations! --K. Peake 17:02, 1 February 2022 (UTC)