Talk:Copper in heat exchangers

Some issues
The article looks good overall, but could use someone proficient in English to just read through it, and copyedit if necessary. That will make it way better.

I did just a cursory browse through and these are things that I found -
 * We do not reference Wikipedia. For internal Wikipedia links, we either link them, or add them under "See also".
 * The referencing could use some help. Please see the various proper formats of referencing, which makes everything easier to understand and work with.
 * The lead is a huge mess right now. It needs a complete rewrite. The second paragraph should probably come in before the first, and there must be extra lines to explain what this article deals with. The first sentence must be unbolded. A few sentences must be removed from the lead. We dont need it so long right now. In short, a total rewrite to the lead would do some good.

This is just from a very brief reading that I saw. The overall article seems good, but I am no expert to say. Neither have I tried to look either. Anyways, try to solve these few issues, and only then can we think if there are other things that need to be done.

Cheers, TheOriginalSoni (talk) 09:57, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

Your ideas were good. The lead was shortened substantially. A new section on history was created. Thank you for your comments. Enviromet (talk) 21:11, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

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