Talk:Copycat (Billie Eilish song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 00:31, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

Hey, I'll start my review now. LOVI 33  00:31, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Cover art needs alt text
 * Remove wikilink to Billie Eilish under songwriters WP:OVERLINK
 * You haven't addressed this
 * NEW: the a in 'audio' needs to capitalized
 * MOS:CAPS under audio video
 * Wikilink EP to extended play
 * "Don't Smile at Me" → "Don't Smile at Me (2017)"
 * "Eilish and her brother Finneas O'Connell co-wrote "Copycat"" → "Eilish and her brother, Finneas O'Connell, co-wrote the song"
 * "with the latter producing it solely" → "with the later solely handling the production"
 * "Musically an electropop and electronic track, with hip hop-influenced instrumentation" → "Musically an electropop and electronic track with a hip hop-influenced instrumentation"
 * wikilink Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
 * "Commercially, the song" → "Commercially, "Copycat""
 * "The song has been awarded several certifications" → "It has also received several certifications"
 * "The Sofi Tukker remix was officially released on January 12, 2018" → "A Sofi Tukker remix was released on January 12, 2018"

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Background and composition
user:LOVI33 I now put a wikilink to it.
 * Release date here doesn't match release date in infobox
 * Giving a release source to the EP on iTunes isn't really a good source unless it is archived. Replace with this.
 * You haven't done this.
 * "by the singer and her brother Finneas O'Connell, the latter of which solely produced it" → "by the singer Finneas O'Connell, her brother and the track's sole producer"
 * "the studio personnel John Greenham and Rob Kinelski" → "the studio personnel, John Greenham, and Rob Kinelski"
 * "A remix by Sofi Tukker was officially released on January 12, 2018" → "A remix by Sofi Tukker was released on January 12, 2018"
 * Wikilink Genius to Genius (website)
 * You haven't adressed this.
 * ""Copycat" is moderately fast at 64 beats per minute (BPM)" → "It has a moderate tempo of 64 beats per minute", with target, moderate per source
 * "a minimalist production consisting of bass guitar and piano" → "a minimalist production consisting of a bass guitar and piano"
 * "Eilish states that" → "Eilish stated that"
 * "Matt Rucker of Ones to Watch's has compared Eilish's vocal's in the song to Lorde" → "Matt Rucker of Ones to Watch compared Eilish's vocals in the song to that of Lorde"

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Reception

 * "Niall Byrne ofThe Irish Times described" → "Niall Byrne of The Irish Times described"
 * "did not enter the Billboard Hot 100, it peaked at number 12 on the" → "did not enter the Billboard Hot 100, however, it peaked at number 12 on the"
 * Last sentence is too similar to that of the intro, maybe remove the "most notably" and comment on it's other certifications

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Live performances

 * Move citations 21 and 22 to end of sentence
 * Move citation 24 to end of sentence
 * You haven't addressed these.

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Personnel
"Credits adapted from the album's liner notes" → "Credits adapted from the liner notes of Don't Smile at Me", with target

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Charts

 * MOS:TABLECAPTION. maybe, Chart performance for "Copycat"
 * MOS:TABLECAPTION is a caption on the table, not the subtitle

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Certifications

 * Again, MOS:TABLECAPTION. Maybe, "Certifications for "Copycat""
 * MOS:TABLECAPTION is a caption on the table, not the subtitle.

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Final comments and verdict

 * for now, once issues are addressed. Great Job by the way, nice to review one of your articles. LOVI  33  02:20, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

All of the issues should be fixed! Let me know if anything else needs to be fixed. DarklyShadows (talk) 03:13, 25 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Hey, it has just come to my attention by that Medium is an unreliable source so you should remove it. Also, Ones to Watch is under discussion as a reliable source so keep posted, you might have to remove that in the future as well.  LOVI  33  12:21, 25 June 2020 (UTC)


 * , you say you've addressed all my comments but you haven't. I have added a few new ones above and commented on the ones you haven't addressed. If you do not think those edits will be good for the article, please respond why you are not doing them. Thanks. LOVI  33  12:42, 25 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Okay, it looks like you've addressed all my comments for real this time. ✅ LOVI  33  13:18, 26 June 2020 (UTC)