Talk:Corey Brunish

I'm fairly certain that this guy is the main contributor to his own article. I plugged the following IPs, which made most of the edits to this page, into GeoIP, and they are from....the places he lives. This seems really suspicious since this person is pretty not notable and the tone of the article is adulatory.

Here are the IPs: 98.113.134.181 108.6.136.108 2601:1C0:4400:B746:B5A2:3189:57B0:C31F 100.33.115.205 71.237.142.171 74.101.196.100

Additionally, all but one of the registered users only edits pages about...the Brunish family. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.120.162.235 (talk) 01:46, 25 January 2019 (UTC)

Recent edits need work, paragraphs have been reduced to what amounts to dot points.
Recent edits have seen to turn almost the entire article into a poorly worded dot points list of achievements, actions and attributions. Recent edits by some users have destroyed the format and structure of paragraphs and appropriate prose and replaced with single dot points sentences of Date + Name + Action/attribution/achievement. I would like to ask that any further edits improve the readability of this article, in line with how Wikipedia articles should be and not continue to contribute to the mess that this has become. KarmaKangaroo (talk) 17:42, 21 April 2024 (UTC)