Talk:Coriolanus Snow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 18:34, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I will review this article within the next week. -Riley1012 (talk) 18:34, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

1. Well-written 2. Verifiable Plot summaries don't require citations per WP:PLOTSOURCE. The sources used are reliable.
 * Snow is influenced by Dr. Gaul's view of state control as necessity to prevent disorder. Should be "as a necessity"
 * Snow reunites with Lucy Gray and they start a relationship... Add a comma before "and"
 * He pursues her through the woods and she leaves a snake to attack him. Add a comma before "and"
 * In Mockingjay, Snow directs the Capitol's military campaign to quash revolution in the Districts... Add "the" before "revolution"
 * Instead she shoots rebellion leader Alma Coin... Add a comma after "Instead"
 * He is a fascist and a totalitarian dictator who aims to crush revolution. Add "the" before "revolution" since we are discussing the specific revolution from the book/series.
 * In his view, however, Lucy Gray betrays him and he becomes a colder character. Add a comma before "and"
 * Snow believes Peeta loves Katniss but she does not reciprocate;... Add a comma before "but"
 * Pavia was unclear which character the audience were supposed to support... Should be "was" instead of "were"
 * Miller found his perspective tiring in the middle of the book, but praised... Remove the comma after "book" (or add "she" after "but")
 * ...Mockingjay – Part 2 neglects other characters to focus on rivalry between Katniss and Snow... Add "the" before "rivalry"
 * All done, with "that"s added in Snow believes that Peeta loves Katniss, but that she does not reciprocate (it's not "Snow believes Peeta loves Katniss; in reality, Katniss does not reciprocate"). — Bilorv ( talk ) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Earwig's Copyvio check similarities just for repeating the title of the books/movies and the quote "It's the things we love most that destroy us" - this is not a cause for concern. But the top similar link is reference 13, and there are a couple of identical phrases that should be reworded to avoid copyright violations.
 * "This left him with bloody sores in his mouth" and "Grandma'am grows roses on the roof of their penthouse" should be reworded.
 * Yep, done. — Bilorv ( talk ) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Spot check:
 * No issues: 1, 5, 7 (per WP:RSPYT, YouTube videos from verified channels of reliable sources can be used), 8, 11, 14, 17, 20, 21, 24, 26, 28, 30, 35, 41, 43

3. Broad
 * The Hunger Games trilogy section notes notable differences between the books and films. Are there any notable differences in the movie adaptation of The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes?
 * Nothing that critics commented on. There's a huge difference in The Hunger Games (for various reasons covered in the article) whereas Ballad is a very direct adaptation. The main beats covered in "Character history" are the same. — Bilorv ( talk ) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)

4. Neutral The article is neutral in its coverage of the character.

5. Stable This article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated The images in the article qualify for fair use and have relevant captions. Wish there was a higher-quality image for Blythe, but there isn't one in the Commons yet.


 * Thanks for the review! I think I've responded to all the points above—let me know if there's anything more to be done. — Bilorv ( talk ) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now. I will pass, well done! -Riley1012 (talk) 21:11, 20 March 2024 (UTC)