Talk:Cork Courthouse, Washington Street/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 11:38, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Hi Xx78900, I'll be taking this on. Comments to follow shortly in the table below!  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  11:38, 21 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi again @Xx78900, I started the review with a source-check. Unfortunately I think I've come across quite a few instances of close paraphrasing, where the text in the article is worded or structured very similarly to the text in the source. I'll pause reviewing the article for now to give you an opportunity to review my comments below. Do let me know what you think.  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  14:55, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi @Unexpectedlydian, thanks for the review! Yes I'm unsurprised at the issues you've outlined: this was the first article which I dedicated significant time to editing and as such I thought that there were likely to be a few niggly bits cropping up like that. I'll make adjustments accordingly now. Xx78900 (talk) 15:29, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I've had a look and made a few adjustments. Regarding the close paraphrasing, I'm really unsure how to correct some of these, particularly for those that are essentially just lists of architectural details. I would appreciate any advice you might have in that regard.Xx78900 (talk) 15:52, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you, that's very helpful. I've left some suggestions below. Hopefully this gives you an idea of how I personally might avoid close paraphrasing; I will point out that I can't access all of the sources, so I would massively appreciate it if you could check some of the larger ones for close-paraphrasing. Burns, O'Connor & O'Riordan 2019 has a lot of references, McNamara 1981 also looks like a big one. Do ping me if you have any questions!  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  17:08, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi @Xx78900, just letting you know that I've completed the initial review. I will refrain from assessing against criteria 1a for now, because there are likely to be further textual changes. I'll check 1a at the end. As mentioned above, do let me know if you need any assistance when addressing changes in criteria 2d. I'd be hugely grateful if you could check for close paraphrasing in the sources mentioned above as well. Many thanks!  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  10:17, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi @Unexpectedlydian, due to my personal life getting quite hectic, I'm not going to have the time to be on wikipedia much over the coming weeks, so I thank you for your time, but I'm going to rescind this article's nomination. Thanks. Xx78900 (talk) 10:06, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hey @Xx78900, no problem at all. I hope to see you around again if you’re able to be back on Wikipedia. Take care of yourself! :)  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  10:10, 30 January 2023 (UTC)