Talk:Cornelia Sorabji/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:26, 9 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "University.." one too many full stops.
 * "LLB" link.
 * "National Council for Women in India" any link? Not notable enough?
 * Redlinked. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "change, and believing" split sentence here, too many run-ons.
 * 20th Century -> 20th century
 * "born on 15 November 1866 in Nashik," infobox has slightly more refined place of birth.
 * Amended infobox as I couldn't find a reliable source for the more specific location. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Although "the Bombay Presidency" is only mentioned in the article and not the infobox.
 * "describing Parsi rituals" link.
 * "in England.[5][1] " ref order.
 * "for men.[8][5]" likewise.
 * "Sorabji got involved" got? Maybe "became"?
 * "the LLB examination" link here too.
 * "practising in Kolkata." wouldn't it have been Calcutta at the time?
 * "the British Raj, purdah for" link for both?
 * "for Indian Independence, relating" our article doesn't capitalise independence.
 * " Mahatma Gandhi's " no need to pipe link.
 * "early 20th Century" century.
 * "including the following.[14]" colon.
 * "Shubala - A Child" en-dash.
 * Any of those periodicals linkable?
 * First see also isn't really encyclopedically titled, just use the actual article title of List of first women lawyers and judges by nationality.
 * Ref 2, 6, 17: page ranges need en-dash.
 * Ref 12: year range needs en-dash.
 * A lot of external links there, anything which would be better incorporated in the aritlce?
 * I've removed a couple, plus taken out the multiple links to Sorabji's books from there. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:47, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Penultimate EL needs en-dash.
 * Many thanks, . I've acted on all of your review comments, and added a couple of notes above. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)