Talk:Coro (non-profit organization)

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Working on reducing the language that comes across as an "Advertisement". Wikiforyou82 (talk) 19:01, 28 April 2011 (UTC)

Edited a number of sections to remove "advertisement" language. Also removed the section on Contract Programs, which came across like an ad. A little unsure how to approach the "Community and Regional Programs" section. They are important elements of the foundation and should be incorporated into the article, but I do agree that they do not come across properly. Any advice would be much appreciated. Wikiforyou82 (talk) 19:08, 28 April 2011 (UTC)

I believe that I have removed the most inappropriate elements of the article and thus have also removed the "ad" tag. If there are other changes to be made, I would happen to take any input. Wikiforyou82 (talk) 19:36, 28 April 2011 (UTC)

Note to Delirium and other editors: Could you please explain what language/sections in the Coro article read like an ad? I made a number of changes and am happy to continue doing so. Without any explanation of what the "ad" language is, however, there is little I can do. I did read the article that links from the alert you posted, but I need specific recommendations for this text. Thank you for your help. Wikiforyou82 (talk) 16:14, 29 April 2011 (UTC)

Still waiting feedback on how to improve the page and avoid "ad" language... Wikiforyou82 (talk) 17:08, 1 May 2011 (UTC)

After repeated attempts to solicit suggestions regarding how to "de-ad" this page, and not receiving any response, I am removing the ad tag since I believe--to the best of my knowledge--that it no longer contains ad language. Wikiforyou82 (talk) 18:21, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Copyright violations / conflict of interest?
Large swaths of text in this article are taken verbatim from Coro's website, and with or without permission this is against Wikipedia policy. I also suspect based on Wikiforyou82's other contributions that a conflict of interest probably exists and that said editor is editing here on behalf of the subject organization. The verbatim text needs to be rememdied and any relationship between Wikiforyou82 and the subject (Coro) should be disclosed immediately.  B.Rossow ·  talk  16:27, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

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