Talk:Corona Australis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 04:16, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Will finish by today eve. Thanks!  — TheSpecialUser  ( TSU ) 04:16, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

The article is well written and sourced properly. Just few things before GA:


 * There are 31 refs so, can you convert reflist to reflist|2
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * External links: Corona Australis photo – -> Corona Australis photo
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * received a name is Alfecca Meridiana, or Alpha CrA - no need of ,
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * 'middle' -> "middle"
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * It is a blue-white main sequence star located 130 light years away, - no need of ,
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * a pair of yellowish white stars 58 light years away which orbit each other every 122 years - need a, after stars
 * added comma after away. Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * It varies by a quarter of a magnitude around an average apparent magnitude of 4.83 every seven hours. It lies 98 light years away - can you merge?
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Lying 202 light years away, Lambda Coronae Australis is a double splittable in small telescopes, the blue white primary has a magnitude of 5.1 with a 9.7 magnitude companion. - little odd and tough to understand. Can you please make a separate sentence about the blue white primary has a magnitude of 5.1 with a 9.7 magnitude companion or clarify the existing one
 * split/rejigged Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Link - Protostar
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 17:26, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Corona Australis also harbours RX J1856.5-3754, an isolated neutron star that is one of the closest to the earth at approximately 200 light years and suspected to be a strange star. - ref?
 * opened up a can of worms with this one - just reading and digesting. I think I'll have to rejig it a bit... rejigged. Casliber (talk · contribs) 18:16, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * The 3rd century BC Aratus wrote of, but did not name, the constellation, -> In the 3rd century BC, Aratus, a Greek didactic poet wrote of but did not name the constellation,
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 18:20, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Ref 31 - can you expand it?
 * am trying but google translate is not liking it. Will look tomorrow.. Casliber (talk · contribs) 18:34, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * within the Black Tortoise of the North (北方玄武, Běi Fāng Xuán Wǔ) - a simple thing needed and that is.
 * done Casliber (talk · contribs) 18:20, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * A later name was Al Iklīl al Janūbiyyah, which the European authors Chilmead -> It was later named as Al Iklīl al Janūbiyyah, which the European authors Chilmead.
 * tricky. I reworded but kept "name" as a noun as that is the subject of Chilmead etc. Casliber (talk · contribs) 18:20, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

This is it for now. I'll have another look at the article once this issues are solved. Cheers! — TheSpecialUser  ( TSU ) 06:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC)