Talk:Corry Tendeloo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 12:38, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review soon. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 12:38, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Change the short description: "20th-century Dutch politician who fought for equal rights for women" → "Dutch lawyer, feminist, and politician (1897–1956)
 * Change the picture alt: "A black and white photograph of a woman" → "A black and white photograph of Corry Tendeloo"
 * Caption can be changed to just "Tendeloo in 1926"
 * Remove the parliamentarygroup parameters. I've never seen this being implemented in any article. My recommendation is to switch to the party parameter.
 * → | party = VDB (until 1946)

PvdA (after 1946)


 * Remove the spouse parameter too.
 * Add a comma here: "Born in the Dutch East Indies Tendeloo..." → Born in the Dutch East Indies, Tendeloo...
 * Fix typo: tme → time
 * Add another comma here: "In the 1930s she..." → In the 1930s, she...
 * "on the Amsterdam City Council" → in the Amsterdam City Council
 * Change the link for Suriname and Curacao since we are talking about 1948. Suriname → Surinam (Dutch colony), Curaçao → Curaçao and Dependencies.
 * And another one: "In early 1955 she..." → In early 1955, she...
 * Another one: "In 1919 she began..." → In 1919, she began...
 * Remove accidental addition: "{" at the end of the "...in the Dutch Women's Council" sentence.
 * Again: "In 1924 Tendeloo joined a law firm and in 1927 she began..." → In 1924, Tendeloo joined a law firm and in 1927, she began...
 * Missing point at the end of the "Through their existence, they intended to affect change over three stages: from awareness to legal equality to practical equality" sentence.
 * Remove automatically from the "...in 1946 she automatically became a member..." sentence. It is not needed.
 * Capitalize COVID in the "Covid-19".
 * More addition of commas after years.
 * Copyvios unlikely.

Images

 * All alright.