Talk:Council of Vézelay

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Parts taken from Second Crusade, Bernard of Clairvaux and Vézelay

Requested as part of the WikiProject Missing encyclopedic articles--Akrasia25 (talk) 12:18, 10 February 2019 (UTC)

Obvious issues
I know this article is fairly new, but I am seeing a couple glaring issues that I can't quite figure out what to do with on my own offhand, especially without being very familiar with the topic. First, roughly halfway through the 'Event' section a paragraph ends with and abrupt "Louis had appeared at Vezelay ; he was taking measures for the [7]" so the reader (myself included) has no ideas what he was taking measures for.

Second, the description of running out of cloth for crosses and using their own clothes to make more strips is mentioned three times in the 'Event' section. The mention in the second paragraph is verbatim to the second to last paragraph. There is also a mention with different wording roughly halfway through the section just before the earlier mentioned incomplete sentence. I may try reading the source to hopefully figure out the first issue and try coming up with the best option for where the 'running out of cloth' part should go so it's not repeated, but may not be able to for awhile yet though, so hopefully somebody else can sooner. 140.186.111.161 (talk) 16:05, 31 March 2020 (UTC)