Talk:Counseling (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:44, 17 January 2013 (UTC)


 * I did some minor copy editing. Please check to see that everything works.
 * From what I can tell, it looks good!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "a position she fought for a few seasons back," -- in the context of the show, referring to seasons is confusing. Could you note which episodes instead, maybe?
 * Added the episode.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * " Then entry was directed by Jeffrey Blitz, who had directed the previous episode "Nepotism"" -- Is there something wrong with this sentence?
 * Opps, yeah. Fixed the typo.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * This marked a decrease in a million viewers and a 14 percent decrease in the 18–49 demographic from the previous episode." -- Any reason for this?
 * I can't really find one. I assume it's just the fact that, after a season premiere, ratings usually always go down a bit.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "The episode became the highest-rated non-sports related NBC program for the original week it aired" -- Are there any specific sporting events which were airing around that time which may have taken viewership from this episode?
 * Not that I could find.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "Joel Keller of AOLTV called it a "vast improvement" from last week's episode" -- You should replace these references to "last week's episode" with the explicit title of the previous episode. Obviously since then Office episodes haven't necessarily aired in order.
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Dup links tool returns one result: Evan Peters
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Dab links tool returns no problems. All external links appear to be working.


 * Will await responses. — Ed! (talk) 19:11, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I believe I have addressed everything. Thank you!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Great work. Passing the article. — Ed! (talk) 10:54, 18 January 2013 (UTC)