Talk:Count On Me (Bruno Mars song)/GA1

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Reviewer: CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs) 01:49, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi my name is CaliforniaDreamsFan and I'll be reviewing this article!

✅
 * Infobox
 * If there is no artwork, then remove the cover and border section.
 * You've identified that the single was recorded somewhere in the production and release section, but omitted it from here? Add it please.

✅. The second amendment is pointless, since when I say composed I'm already stating that it was written and produced by the same people.
 * Lead
 * Space between "November 7, 2011" and "It was composed".
 * "It was composed by Mars, Philip Lawrence, and Ari Levine, under their alias, The Smeezingtons." –––> It was written, composed, and produced by Mars, Philip Lawrence, and Ari Levine, under their alias, The Smeezingtons."
 * "Count On Me" is a folk and tropical record. The song's lyrics detail the importance of friendship and covey a positive message." –––> "Musically, 'Count On Me" is a folk and tropical record that lyrically details the importance of friendship and covey a positive message."
 * "The single had its peak position" –––> "The single peaked at"
 * Remove the certifications of Australia and New Zealand; it's slightly trivial and particular, noting that there are two more certifications in two other countries as listed at the bottom of the article.

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 * Production and release
 * ""Count On Me" was issued to contemporary hit radio and adult contemporary radio on November 7, 2011, in Australia by Atlantic Records and Warner Music Australia as the fifth single.[2][3]" –––> Merge it to the top paragraph since it's only one sentence.
 * The rest is good!

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 * Composition
 * Who "labeled" the track tropical and folk? Identify the reviewers/crtitics/etc.
 * "It was described as a "bittersweet ballad", "slow burner" and a "sandy-sweet tune". –––> By who? I assume it's by three different critics, so separate them and define them by each critic/publication.
 * "It draws from the works of Jason Mraz and David Cook," –––> "It draws musical elements from the works of Jason Mraz and David Cook".
 * To the above comment; who identifies this? Define the critic/publication.

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 * Reception
 * Change title to Critical reception
 * Funny, but it's not "Marry You", it's "Count on You".
 * Remove the comma after The AU Review.
 * "Rivas found the lyrics to be "nice positive"" –––> doesn't make sense.
 * "While, reviewing the album, Tim Sendra of AllMusic" –––> However, while reviewing the parent album, Tim Sendra from AllMusic"
 * "However, the track is" –––> "However, Sendra did say that the track is"

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 * Chart performance
 * "Count On Me" spent two weeks at its highest position, 13, after debuting at number 21 on August 29, 2011, in New Zealand." –––> "In New Zealand, "Count On Me" spent two weeks at its peak position of 13, after debuting at number 21 on August 29, 2011."
 * "In 2013, it entered the Spanish Charts on March 24, 2013, at its peak position, seven, and left the charts two weeks after" – "In 2013, it peaked at number seven on the Spanish Singles Chart and left the charts after two weeks."

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 * Certifications
 * Add the certifications for Austria and Switzerland in the chart performance heading because it is not featured there.


 * Overall
 * Really satisfying article but just needs a bit more editing. On hold for 7 days, good luck! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 01:49, 28 August 2016 (UTC)


 * I will take care of it over this week, thank you for reviewing the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

I have addressed all the issues and left a note on the lead, please take a second look and tell what do do you think. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:57, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Sweet, passing! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 07:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)