Talk:County Route 106 (Rockland County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) First sentence: indicate route is in Rockland County, New York
 * 2) Combine last two sentences in first paragraph of lead
 * 3) First paragraph of route description: remove information that will be repeated later, such as intersections with PIP and US 9W/202, and move information about former NY 210 designation to history
 * 4) rewrite "Lake Welch Parkway (seasonal road), which provides..." to say "Lake Welch Parkway, a seasonal road which provides..."
 * 5) Try not to use "CR 106" in every sentence of route description
 * 6) Remove second sentence of third paragraph of route description and add "where CR 106 makes a left turn" to prior sentence
 * 7) Wikilink Palisades Interstate Parkway
 * 8) Combine last two sentences in third paragraph of route description
 * 9) "semi-highway"? Sounds awkward
 * 10) Combine last two sentences of route description
 * 11) Second sentence of history: added "and headed" after Monroe
 * 12) Combine third and fourth sentences in history
 * 13) Make "CR 106A" a subheading of the history section
 * 14) In major intersections, indicate former county route designations in notes

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 16:44, 25 January 2009 (UTC)


 * I did all but the subhead of CR 106A as one, it would be an MOS violation, and as is, it meets USRD standards. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 19:35, 25 January 2009 (UTC)