Talk:County Route 166A (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Try to get a map of the article for the infobox
 * 2) Wikilink County Route 166 (Sullivan County, New York) in infobox
 * 3) "Masten Lake Crossover Road" does not need to be in italics
 * 4) "the community"? Can you please clarify what community?
 * 5) Add some more historical information to the lead
 * 6) "all woodlands, with no buildings"? A little wordy, "woodland" would suffice here
 * 7) "commercial residence"? sounds awkward
 * 8) "downtown community": remove "community"
 * 9) "things had changed dramatically" sounds like a NPOV violation, remove the word dramatically and rephrase
 * 10) "onto Exit 112 to County Route 172" sounds awkward
 * 11) In last sentence of history, change second "of" to "by"
 * 12) Is the mileage known for the NY 17 intersection?
 * 13) If possible, try to get a picture of the route for the article

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 14:31, 8 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 14:44, 8 March 2009 (UTC)