Talk:County Route 166 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Place a request for a shield of the route
 * 2) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 3) Also request shields for other county routes CR 166 intersects
 * 4) Remove "Exit 112" from infobox
 * 5) Replace "in the county alone" with "within the county"
 * 6) Place last sentence in lead in preceding paragraph
 * 7) The second sentence in the route description sounds unclear and awkward: try clarifing and rephrasing
 * 8) In fourth sentence of route description, remove "homes"
 * 9) "a dead-end highway that intersects near the eastern terminus" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
 * 10) Replace "the homes re-emerge" with "the route heads through residential areas again"
 * 11) Why is a picture of Exit 98 of the Quickway included in the article? It does not relate to CR 166. I would suggest getting a picture of the actual route, if possible
 * 12) "in the by"? Awkward, needs to be fixed
 * 13) In first sentence of history, replace "of the" with "for"
 * 14) In last sentence of history, indicate CR 166 applies to this former portion of NY 17
 * 15) Is the mileage known for the junctions along CR 166?

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 01:53, 4 February 2009 (UTC)


 * All done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 20:20, 4 February 2009 (UTC)