Talk:County Route 168 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Place a request for a shield of the route
 * 2) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 3) Replace "along the aqueduct" with "on Roebling's Delaware Aqueduct"
 * 4) In lead, do not need to indicate route is in Minisink Ford besides the first sentence
 * 5) In first sentence of route description, remove words from parentheses and place comma after "Aqueduct"
 * 6) Do not need Minisink Ford Road italicized
 * 7) "un-manned" should not be hyphenated
 * 8) Minisink Battleground Road does not need to be italicized either
 * 9) Replace "residential homes" with residences"
 * 10) Replace "After those few homes" with "Past the residential area"
 * 11) Clarify "keyed-access"
 * 12) This article is about CR 168. Is it nessecary to list too much information about the history of Minisink Battleground County Park?
 * 13) Try to find a little more history about the actual road itself
 * 14) Is the mileage for the NY 97 intersection known?
 * 15) In the major intersections table, I would suggest listing the NY 97 junction as either one entry with a notation indicating a short concurrency or as two entries indicating the western and eastern ends of the concurrency

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:11, 4 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Most done. As for the history, CR 168's only purpose is to serve the Park, and probably the reason for designation. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 20:25, 4 February 2009 (UTC)