Talk:County Route 35 (Warren County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Again, remove the picture from infobox and place within route description
 * 2) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 3) Change the sentence "There is an interchange with the Northway, being Interchange 23." to "The route interchanges with the Northway at Interchange 23."
 * 4) Move the sentence about the Northeat bridge repalcement to after the sentence about when the route was established
 * 5) Integrate the last sentence of the lead into the first sentence
 * 6) Remove the word "entire"
 * 7) "becomes woodland and forestry"? sounds awkward. Try "become heavily forested".
 * 8) "local woods road"? What kind of road is that?
 * 9) First sentence of history: add comma after "Department"
 * 10) "as that is who maintains the Northway and the bridge"? referring to the state or federal government?
 * 11) Add comma after "Inventory"
 * 12) Is the mileage known for the I-87 junction?

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 18:04, 28 January 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 18:19, 28 January 2009 (UTC)