Talk:County Route 574 (Erie County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Delink date and year throughout article.
 * 2) In first sentence, indicate Erie County is in New York
 * 3) Change "supplies" to "serves"
 * 4) In lead, bold Route 422
 * 5) Combine second and third sentences in route description
 * 6) "Intersects" is used too much in the route description; try replacing some of them
 * 7) Try not to use "Route 574" in every sentence of the route description
 * 8) Too many instances of X miles in route description; try using mile marker X or milepost X
 * 9) First sentence of history: rewrite to say "Erie County Route 574 was originally designated as New York State Route 422"
 * 10) Combine last two sentences of history
 * 11) If possible, try to add a picture of the road to the article

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:08, 25 January 2009 (UTC)


 * All done. As for an image, you may not believe this, but I had one. I lost it in a Windows glitch. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 02:17, 25 January 2009 (UTC)