Talk:County Route 74 (Rockland County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Do we know the exact year County Route 74 was created?
 * 2) Remove the image from the infobox and place in the route description
 * 3) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 4) In lead, use "Rockland County" instead of "Rockland"
 * 5) Mention some of the historical information in the lead
 * 6) Route description: replace "nearby" with "after" in second sentence
 * 7) Last sentence in first paragraph of route description: replace "into" with "enters"
 * 8) "community of houses" sounds awkward
 * 9) "passing into the community of Viola" sounds awkward
 * 10) Combine sixth and seventh sentences in second paragraph of route description
 * 11) First sentence in third paragrph: begin with "Past the NY 306 intersection"
 * 12) "sinks into the developed community" sounds awkward
 * 13) replace "makes a drop" with "turns"
 * 14) "developed community of homes in businesses"? try rephrasing
 * 15) replace "buildings" with "areas" as the road does not pass through the actual buildings
 * 16) Combine first two sentences in last paragraph of route description
 * 17) Last sentence of route description: isn't CR 35A Clarkstown Road?
 * 18) First sentence of history: remove "also"
 * 19) Second sentence of history: remove "for them"
 * 20) Last sentence in first paragraph of history: use semicolon after 1905
 * 21) Is there a reference for the mileage in the major intersections

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:32, 25 January 2009 (UTC)


 * All done, and there is no exact date. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 15:44, 25 January 2009 (UTC)