Talk:County Route 80 (Rockland County, New York)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Remove picture from infobox and place within route description
 * 2) Try to get a map for the infobox
 * 3) Is the exact year of the route's creation known?
 * 4) In second sentence of lead, remove "Rockland County"
 * 5) If CR 80 is third longest route and CR 33 is longer, what is the other longer route?
 * 6) Combine second and third sentences in second paragraph of lead
 * 7) Last sentence of lead sounds awkward: try rewriting
 * 8) First paragraph of route description: repeats what will come later. Try moving information to later parts of rotue description to describe the route in west to east progression
 * 9) Try not to use "CR 80" in every sentence in route description
 * 10) In sentence "CR 80 intersects two major south/north routes in western Rockland in CR 81 and New York State Route 306" place comma after Rockand and remove the following "in"
 * 11) "on to" should be one word
 * 12) Try not to use "drivers can turn south", it sounds awkward
 * 13) Combine third and second to last sentences in second paragraph of rotue description (the ones about the intersections with NY 45 and PIP)
 * 14) First paragraph of history: are the dates known for the creation of any of the county routes?
 * 15) Delink dates in history
 * 16) Rephrase "$15,600 was given to Rockland County"
 * 17) Last sentence of history: add "along" after "sidewalks"

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 18:22, 26 January 2009 (UTC)


 * Done, except for #3 and #14, which is very limited. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 18:49, 26 January 2009 (UTC)