Talk:County Route S18 (California)/GA1

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 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
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 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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 * C. No original research:
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 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
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 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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This article meets almost all of the criteria. There are no pictures, but I won't fail or On-hold the article for it. I do wish to see a map request in the next few days however. Anyway, fix the comments listed above and I will pass this article. Thanks. Mitch 32contribs 12:30, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
 * One comment. In the sentence, The route follows in a convoluted pattern from State Route 133 in Laguna Beach to State Route 55 near Orange, "convoluted" is very POVish, and not suitable for an encyclopedia. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  12:43, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

Sorry about the pictures; I'm not a photographer. However, I'll see what I can do about the pre-2008 history. Can you please hold this GA Review until next Monday? I'm kind of busy this week in school, doing homework, and studying for tests. And I really don't have time to address the problem right now. And yes, my username used to be formerly Dabbydabby. Dabby (talk) 01:54, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

"Convoluted" - POV removed and sentence reworded. Dabby (talk) 02:01, 28 May 2008 (UTC)