Talk:Courbet-class battleship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 03:57, 11 October 2010 (UTC)


 * "...spending most of their time escorting French troop convoys from North Africa and covering the Otranto Barrage." → escorting troops from North Africa to?
 * Related to above, later on in the history section, this is never mentioned (maybe I am missing it). It either needs to be mentioned, or it should have a citation attached in the lead.
 * I did the usual light ce, and also re-arranged a few sentences.
 * "The Courbets were longer than their predecessors..." → Perhaps it would be useful to include some of these predecessors ("... such as the (insert ship name) and (insert ship name)..."). You do this in the next sentence.
 * The list under the subheading of "postwar modernization" would probably be better incorporated as text with a standard sentence structure. Lists are oftentimes considered better than text by certain publishers, but I think Wikipedia editors prefer paragraph structure.
 * Images check out.
 * Referencing looks good.
 * The link to "Parsons" may need to be disambiguated.

JonCatalán(Talk) 04:16, 11 October 2010 (UTC)