Talk:Coventry City 2–2 Bristol City (1977)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 07:16, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

I'll review this.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 07:16, 4 June 2021 (UTC) It looks promising in my review, with a few minor improvements I could suggest to tip it over:
 * For the referee in the infobox, he's listed as representing Tonbridge. Were referees not affiliated to Kent County Football Association back then?
 * Also, shouldn't it be mentioned in the article body?
 * I have no idea on the affiliation question, but every source I've looked at lists his location as Tonbridge. I've added a line to the pre-match section. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 12:00, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * What was the reason for Hill's departure?
 * Reason added. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 09:46, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Manager Alan Dicks", Shouldn't that be "their manager Alan Dicks"?
 * I'd have thought either way works, but I've added in "their" since you suggested it. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 09:46, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * With the link to the 1975-76 Football League season in Sunderland's paragraph, is there a more direct link to the actual Second Division season?
 * There isn't an article on that. just goes back to the overall Football League page for that season. I have amended the piped link though, to go through that redirect, so that if ever anyone creates such a page we'll be ready and waiting for it...  &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 09:46, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * There should be an WP:INLINE source for the debate as to whom was responsible for initiating the delay to kick-off
 * Added. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 09:46, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Coventry seemed comfortable at that point" - MOS:OP-ED (though I think that whole sentence should be reworded due to the "refused to give up" being there.
 * I have reworded this as quotes from the source rather than it being in Wikivoice. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 09:46, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * The last paragraph in the Match summary could do with some inline citations, especially about the news coming through and Hill asking the scoreboard operator to show the scores.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 09:46, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * In legacy, is there a number for those who got arrested?
 * Numbers and charges added from the source. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 11:16, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * In the paragraph about Sunderland complaining, there's quite a long sentence there on it. Can we break it up to the complaint and the reprimand please?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 12:06, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Is there a reference for Sunderland fans abusing Hill at Fulham?
 * Well the two refs 45 and 46 at the end of the paragraph covered all that, but I've mixed them into the text a bit more for clarity. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 11:16, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Coventry and Sunderland were involved in further drama" - WP:PEACOCK
 * Reworded. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 11:53, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Is there a source for Ferguson and Strachan's claims?
 * Reference 48 covers everything in the five sentences since reference 47. We don't need to put an inline after every sentence, do we? &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 11:16, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Reference 20, needs an author, same for reference 26, 39 and 45
 * I can't see author names in those references, can you point them out to me? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:19, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Reference 26 - Telegraph needs to be in italics
 * Already was or beaten to it. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:19, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Reference 47, author reference formatting needs to be consistent with the others (needs surname first)
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:19, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * All in all looks good but just needs that little push to tip it over. Please ping me when it's been done.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 07:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review, and I think everything you've mentioned so far has been looked at now. Cheers &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 12:06, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * That's a pass then. Well done and .  The C of E  God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 14:50, 4 June 2021 (UTC)