Talk:Cowichan Bay Fire Rescue

This appears to be copied directly from. Ground Zero | t 15:34, 24 May 2007 (UTC)

- Department has given permission to use this please note that creator is also a member of this department and that I researched and wrote the material myself on the website. Radar81

Thank you for addressing the copyright violation issue. This article is still unsuitable because it is not written like an encyclopedia article. It does not even identify where Cowichan Bay is. This would be very confusing for a reader from outside of BC. Also, the headings are not in the wikipedia style. the Style Manual can help you with this. thanks. Ground Zero | t 00:30, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

- Cleaned this up a bit, looks a little better will add more content later, thanks for the comments. Radar81 | t 15:58, 11 June 2007 (UTC)