Talk:Crazy (4Minute song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:55, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Not long after reviewing your previous GAN, I will take this one on --K. Peake 12:55, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "with additional writing by" → "with co-writing from"
 * "Hyuna, and was released on February 9, 2015, by" → "Hyuna. It was released on February 9, 2015 by"
 * "the track sees the group returning to their signature" → "the song sees the group returning to their earlier"
 * "Song" is appearing twice in the sentence so I'm using "track" for the latter half of the sentence.

✅ everything else
 * "its production, hip hop sound and the group's" → "its production and hip hop sound, as well as 4Minute's"
 * "Billboard in 2019 included the track" → "In 2019, Billboard included the song"
 * "the single debuted and peaked at number three" → "it peaked at number three"
 * "number two on the US" → "number two on the US Billboard"
 * "channel and features" → "channel simultaneously with the single release, and features"
 * "performing non-stop choreography" → "performing constant choreography"
 * "The group promoted" → "4Minute promoted"
 * "their solo concert in Myanmar in April 2015." → "their April 2015 solo concert in Myanmar."

Background and release
✅ All
 * Img looks good
 * "South Korean girl group 4Minute took nearly one year hiatus." → "4Minute took a hiatus for nearly one year."
 * "announced their return to" → "announced a return to"
 * "their sixth extended play," → "their sixth EP,"
 * Remove target on Crazy
 * "one, "Cold Rain" was" → "one, "Cold Rain", was"
 * "on January 26, 2015, by" → "on January 26, 2015, through"
 * "second single from the album," → "second single from the EP," with the target
 * "impacted Korean Broadcasting System radio" → "was serviced to Korean Broadcasting System radio stations"
 * "expressed the group's true colours." → "expressed 4Minute's true colours."
 * Target Gayoon to Heo Ga-yoon
 * Fix MOS:QWQ issues with the below statement

Music and lyrics
✅ All
 * "set over low-pitched beats featuring" → "with low-pitched beats that features" on the audio sample text and remove wikilink on Middle Eastern
 * The two sentences about the song being hip hop should be the ones that start the section instead
 * Target key to Key (music)
 * Target hooks to Hook (music)
 * "It makes use of" → ""Crazy" makes use of"
 * Wikilink drum machines like this instead
 * Remove wikilink on Middle Eastern
 * [15][13] should be put in numerical order
 * Remove target on rap
 * Target Jiyoon to Jeon Ji-yoon
 * Target Sohyun to Kwon So-hyun
 * Target Jihyun to Son Ji-hyun
 * "Gayoon who performs" → "Gayoon, who performs"
 * "the group taunts the listener into its" → "4Minute taunts the listener into the song's"

Critical reception
✅ All
 * "received generally positive reviews" → "was met with generally positive reviews"
 * All of the rankings on lists should be in the same area of critical reception; it is awkward having most at the end and some near the start, they should all be around the latter
 * "Dorof further wrote that" → "Jakob Dorof wrote that" since the order should be switched for lists
 * Idolator should be italicised
 * "opined the group had" → "opined that 4Minute had"
 * "aggressive" and felt" → "aggressive," and felt"
 * ""outstanding" which he" → ""outstanding," which he"
 * "ranked it the best song of 4Minutes' career," → "named the track the best song of their career,"
 * "and Idolator listed" → "and Idolator both listed"

Awards
✅
 * You should create this sub-section for the table and its above text, though fixes are needed; see your own article "Any Song" for a proper example

Chart performance
✅ All
 * Retitle to Commercial performance
 * "It was the sixth" → ""Crazy" was the sixth"
 * "in February 2015 of the" → "in February 2015 on the"
 * "at number two on US" → "at number two on the US"

Promotion and music video
✅ All
 * Retitle to Music video and promotion, since promotion comes after the music video here
 * "to the release of the single," → "to the release of "Crazy","
 * "serving as a" → "which served as a"
 * "accompanying music video for was uploaded to the group's" → "accompanying music video was uploaded to 4Minute's"
 * The word official is useless here
 * [33][9] put in numerical order
 * Wikilink black and white
 * "For music critic Dorof, the video" → "For Dorof, the video"
 * "the song and the album," → "the song and Crazy,"
 * "made several appearances on" → "made appearances on several"
 * "and SBS' Inkigayo." → "and SBS' Inkigayo to perform the song."
 * "solo concert titled" → "solo concert entitled"

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * but should be easy to fix the issues since this article is quite short! --K. Peake 21:46, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Kyle Peake, thank you so much for another quick and awesome review! I have left one comment above and fixed everything else as you pointed out. Also, I added another fact to the newly created "Awards" section which I'd missed earlier. Let me know what you think of all the changes. -- Ashley  yoursmile!  07:48, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ now after I did some very brief copy editing. --K. Peake 15:55, 28 October 2020 (UTC)