Talk:Creating Capabilities

Peer Review
I think providing an article on Nussbaum’s Creating Capabilities was very bold of you, and this article will be very useful to everyone wanting to learn more about her work and/or having a hard time grasping her approach.

Moving forward, I think you should show how her work is applied in real life situations in order for her approach to be understandable for the public. I suggest that you focus more on how her approach could be implemented in society, and less on the comparison between her approach and Amartya Sen’s.

Keep up the great work!

~ Zp 2298 (talk) 02:10, 26 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer feedback for article #2
The article did a strong job making a complicated topic be digestible for readers. It was very effective and understandable. The organization is also another key strength about this article.

The author needs to focus on developing the content of the article. While the outline is present, the content is lacking for some sections making it hard for the reader to understand the key takeaways from the book.

Regardless, once the article is done, I anticipate it to be very well-written. Psg2022 (talk) 23:10, 26 October 2022 (UTC)