Talk:Creep (2014 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:29, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have on a first pass, so it's on hold. Incidentally, I saw and enjoyed this movie a year or so back. So it was really nice to read more about it. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:20, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " independent found footage psychological horror " is a WP:SEAOFBLUE. ✅
 * Brice mentioned three times in the opening sentence, re-word to avoid repetition. ✅
 * "an ad" -> "advertisement" and for what? ✅
 * Lead is slim, could use some commentary about the reception etc. ✅
 * No mention throughout of any budget information?
 * "ad for a gig" not encyclopedic in tone. ✅
 * "Josef states to have an" Josef states that he has.... ✅
 * "Aarons concerns" Aaron's. ✅
 * "stating the mask was a gift " probably "claiming" rather than repeat "state" again. ✅
 * "a drink of whiskey" drink of is redundant. ✅
 * " she was into " not encyclopedic tone.✅
 * "leave but " leave once again but. ✅
 * "his keys Aaron hears " comma after keys. ✅
 * "that Josef regained consciousness" has regained. ✅
 * " he knows of the truth" -> "he knows the truth about...?" ✅
 * "as he knows nothing about Josef" well he knows where he lives....!! ✅
 * "In the final movie, " On the final DVD? ✅
 * " wouldn't " avoid contractions. ✅
 * " South by Southwest Film Festival " just "South by Southwest" linked and "film festival" after. ✅
 * "March 8, 2014 and " comma after 2014. ✅
 * "on April 5, 2016 from" likewise after 2016. ✅
 * "but that "Despite " sentence case within the quote. ✅
 * (Same for "states, "A smart" above). ✅
 * " at South by Southwest, Duplass" no need to relink the festival. ✅
 * Sequel section needs some work, it was, after all, released in 2017. ✅
 * Avoid SHOUTING in the ref titles.
 * If I don't receive any feedback from my comments by 12 April, I will fail the nomination. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 21:12, 7 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Sorry - work has been busy! I'll get on this! ReaderofthePack (formerly Tokyogirl79)  (｡◕‿◕｡)  13:23, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries. Happy to allow time as long as I know you're getting to it!  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 13:25, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Hey, hope you're well. Do  you  think you'll be getting to this  soon? Cheers, The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 07:20, 20 April 2020 (UTC)


 * I'll work on this right now! ReaderofthePack (formerly Tokyogirl79)  (｡◕‿◕｡)  23:17, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * With the budget, I can't find anything definite - pretty much everything just describes it as "low budget" or "microbudget". ReaderofthePack (formerly Tokyogirl79)  (｡◕‿◕｡)  23:23, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * With the capitalizations in the sourcing, I'm a little uncertain about changing the capitalization since that is how the source itself styled the title - the other thing is that this is also one of the way the title is styled (I added a note about this in the lead).
 * As far as the sequel section goes, what other information should I add? I can add some about the reception, but anything else? ReaderofthePack (formerly Tokyogirl79)  (｡◕‿◕｡)  23:46, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Shoot, if the missing stuff in the sequel section was a snake, I'd have been bitten. ReaderofthePack (formerly Tokyogirl79)  (｡◕‿◕｡)  23:50, 21 April 2020 (UTC)


 * This is all good, and I'm happy to promote now. Good work.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:13, 22 April 2020 (UTC)