Talk:Crime and Dissonance/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 03:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1
 * Is this in British English or American?
 * That's a good question. I generally try to use AmE since most topics I cover are American; however I don't speak it myself and now that you bring this up I'm wondering if there's even a particular reason for an album of Italian music to use it. I guess the record label is American but if you convince me one way or the other I'll scan through and standardise anything missing. GRAPPLE   X  04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I can do that. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * proto-sampledelica - Perhaps a link or something?
 * Linked to sampling (music). Sampledelia exists but it's not in the best condition; should I go with it anyway? GRAPPLE   X  04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I'd link to Sampledelia, as it's a more relevant topic. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 2
 * Fix the CN tag.
 * Got it, thanks. GRAPPLE   X  04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)


 * 3
 * Possible further sources:
 * Crime and Dissonance at Stylus Magazine
 * Already cited in 5 places. :P
 * ENNIO MORRICONE; Crime and Dissonance at The Stranger
 * Having a look now. GRAPPLE   X  04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

Source spotchecks (based on this revision)
 * FN1
 * A Dagored appears nowhere in the article. Otherwise checks out
 * B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * D Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * FN5
 * A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * D Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * E Having trouble with the first sentence. He says "more relevant", perhaps as a way to avoid the "unfortunate" kitsch that Morricone has become known for. Otherwise okay.
 * FN8
 * A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * FN11
 * A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
 * B Checks out, no close paraphrasing

Further discussion

 * I'll let you deal with that before I do a source spotcheck. Holding. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:52, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Spotchecks after lunch. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:04, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Couple issues. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Did a little extra citing and rephrasing. I should probably get to bed soon though, it's nearly 8. :/ GRAPPLE   X  06:41, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
 * No need to overwork yourself for this. Passing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:44, 18 August 2012 (UTC)