Talk:Crime in Kuwait

First sentence
Hello! I stumbled upon this article and noticed the first sentence is a little awkward--is there any way to edit it to make more sense? Or perhaps a more specific question would be: can the first sentence begin with something other than "Crime in Kuwait"? I'm thinking of something along the lines of "There is a low rate of crime in Kuwait." I'm new to this stuff, so I don't want to jump the gun and mess anything up. Thanks! -SalliePoPo (talk) 00:40, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

I'm sure you'll do fine if you want to make the corrections yourself, especially if it is just spelling and grammar. I may do a little clean up myself soon. I think part of the reason that new articles get featured on the frontpage is to attract editors to add to and improve what is written. In this case I strongly suspect the creator of the article is not a native English speaker. Mantisia (talk) 03:03, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I have properly reworded the sentence "There is a low rate of crime in Kuwait".  Otolemur crassicaudatus  (talk) 06:32, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

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